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minus-squarePhegan@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up55·5 months agoFirst of all, it’s a kids book. Second of all, it’s a poorly written kids book.
minus-squaresugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up13·5 months agoEh, I think it’s pretty well-written. It hits all the important parts of a good kids novel series: fun to read few immediately obvious plot holes (that a 10yo would notice) easy for a child to imagine that they’re in that world We need more series like Harry Potter with high engagement that also promote creativity.
First of all, it’s a kids book.
Second of all, it’s a poorly written kids book.
Eh, I think it’s pretty well-written. It hits all the important parts of a good kids novel series:
We need more series like Harry Potter with high engagement that also promote creativity.